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Invitation letter to my best friend

Invitation letter to my best friend eRwoG
Dear AfifaI am writing this letter to personally invite you and your family members of my parents' birthday party. It will be held on first July 2021 at my residence. The party will begin at 5 p. m and dinner will start at 7 p. m onwards. There will be a lot of interesting things. For example: we may play see-saw, hopscotch, although I called clowns and heros of cartoons. Because, I would like to be happy my parents. If my parents are happy, I shall achieve my aims in my heart. If you visit to this party, I will be glad from you. Do not forget coming. I shaal wait for you. I hope, you will not a pity your coming. Hoping to meet with all of you at the party and bless the couples. ThanksMokhinur
Dear
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AfifaI
Did you mean "am I"?
am
writing this letter to
personally
invite you and your family members of my parents' birthday
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party
. It will
be held
on
first
July 2021 at my residence. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
party
will
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begin
at 5 p. m and dinner will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
at 7 p. m onwards. There will be
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a lot of
interesting things.
For example
: we may play
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
-
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
saw
, hopscotch, although I called clowns and
Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean "heroes", the plural form of the noun 'hero'?
heros
of cartoons.
“Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
, I would like to be happy my parents. If my parents are happy, I shall achieve my aims in my heart. If you visit to this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
party
, I will be
The usual collocation for "glad" is "about" not "from". Did you mean "glad about"?
glad from
you. Do not forget coming. I
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shaal
wait for you. I hope, you will not a pity your coming. Hoping to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
with all of you at the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
party
and bless the couples.
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ThanksMokhinur
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IELTS letter Invitation letter to my best friend

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
136 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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