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Write a letter of complaint to the manager of the air line by which you travelled.In your letter write about the time and destination of your journey.Write about the problems.Say what you would like them to do about it

Write a letter of complaint to the manager of the air line by which you travelled. In your letter write about the time and destination of your journey. Write about the problems. Say what you would like them to do about it nx97o

I am writing this complaint letter because of dissatisfactory service offered during my recent travel visit. Let me explain in more detail. I travelled by Jet airways 9W 6 on 8th September 2018. I usually prefer this airline, as I am a platinum member and due to courteous service offered by the staff. When I boarded the plane, the crew informed that I am being upgraded to business class from economy class. I was very happy with this special gesture. But after few minutes, one of the cabin crew members approached me and informed that they had some misconception in the name and seat which was offered to me belongs to other person. I shifted to my original seat which was mentioned on boarding pass. During Breakfast, the food served was cold and salty. I complained about the meal to the flight attendant, but he didn't responded in a proper way. I would like to suggest some measures to avoid this problems. I would request you to give proper training to the staff and ask them to cross check the name of the customer, if they are upgrading someone. I would also suggest you to look towards the quality of food served during travel. I hope you would look into this matter and take corrective measures against it. Yours faithfully,

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because
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dissatisfactory
 service offered during my recent travel visit.

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Let
 me This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpret
explain
 in more detail. I travelled by Jet airways 9W 6 on 8th September 2018. I usually
 prefer this airline, as I am a platinum member and due to courteous service offered by the staff. When I boarded the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:aircraft
plane
, the crew informed that I am being upgraded
 to business This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
 from economy This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
. I was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 happy with this special gesture. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 after few minutes, one of the cabin crew members approached me and informed that they had This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 misconception in the name and seat which was offered
 to me belongs to other person. I shifted to my original seat which was mentioned
 on boarding pass. During Breakfast, the food served was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chillyfrosty
cold
 and salty. I complained about The usual prepositions to use when you do something for the benefit of another person is "for". Did you mean "the meal for the flight"?the meal for the flight
the meal to the flight
 attendant, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 he didn't The verb 'didn't' requires base form of this verb: "respond"respond
responded
Consider replacing "in a proper way" with the adverb for "proper"; e.g., "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
in a proper way
. I would like to suggest This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 measures to avoid Did you mean "these"?these
this
 problems. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 would request you to give proper training to the staff and ask them to cross This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 the name of the customer, if they are upgrading someone. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 would also
 suggest you to look towards the quality of food served during travel.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 hope you would look into this matter and take corrective measures against it.

Yours faithfully
, 