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MOTIVATION LETTER For Stipendium Hungaricum Scholarship

MOTIVATION LETTER For Stipendium Hungaricum Scholarship L3xe8
My name is Lim Theanglay and I am applying for BA in Civil Engineering. Having seen the announcement of the Stipendium Hungaricum Scholarship extremely inspire me to step up toward the best overseas education in Hungary which is an enormous economy European country especially, its education is extensively provided to students as an international program. From the experiences and achievements that I have earned in upper secondary school, I firmly believe that it would prepare me well to be a potential candidate for this competition. Being a dedicated student in High school that come up with a manner of trying, being patient, honest, and struggling to any faced obstacles, I have gained some good achievements in studying for national as well as international awards. Those achievements comprise the award from the Outstanding Physics National Examination, the award from some Olympiad contests include IJSO (in Indonesia), APT JSO (in Vietnam), and from some exchange programs in the field of study in Japan and Thailand as well.
My name is
Lim
Theanglay and
I am applying for BA in Civil Engineering. Having
seen
the announcement of the
Stipendium
Hungaricum
Scholarship
extremely
inspire me to step up toward the best overseas education in Hungary which is an enormous economy European country
especially
, its education is
extensively
provided to students as an international program. From the experiences and achievements that I have earned in upper secondary school, I
firmly
believe that it would prepare me well to be a potential candidate for this competition.

Being a dedicated student in High school that
come
up with a manner of trying, being patient, honest, and struggling to any faced obstacles, I have gained
some
good
achievements in studying for national
as well
as international awards. Those achievements comprise the award from the Outstanding Physics National Examination, the award from
some
Olympiad contests include
IJSO
(in Indonesia), APT
JSO
(in Vietnam), and from
some
exchange programs in the field of study in Japan and Thailand
as well
.
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IELTS letter MOTIVATION LETTER For Stipendium Hungaricum Scholarship

Letter
  American English
2 paragraphs
165 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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