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Write a letter of application for a job of guide.

Write a letter of application for a job of guide. xBV6
Dear Sir or Madam I am writing to apply for a job as a guide at your company which I saw advertised in "Today Uzbekistan" newspaper on February 12 in 2021. I am twenty six years old and obtained a degree in Philology and teaching languages at University of World Languages in 2017. I am presently working as an English language teacher in the department of Foreign languages at school where I have been for the five years. I feel, I would be suitable for this job because I have good organizational skills and I greatly enjoy getting on with new people. I have experience of this kind of work. When I was a student in the University, I was a tour guide for foreign visitors and told them about historical places of Uzbekistan. If you would like me to attend an interview, I would be able to come anytime convenient to you as I do want to a member of your companyI would be grateful if you could consider me for this position. Yours faithfully, Nargiza Raxmonova
Dear Sir or Madam

I am writing to apply for a job as a guide at your
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company
which I
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saw
advertised in
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"
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Today
Uzbekistan
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"
newspaper on February 12 in 2021.

I am
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twenty six
years
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old
and obtained a degree in Philology and teaching
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languages
at University of World
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Languages
in 2017. I am
presently
working as an English
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language
teacher in the department of Foreign
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languages
at school where I have been for the five years.
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I
feel, I would be suitable for this job
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because
I have
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good
organizational
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skills
and I
greatly
enjoy getting on with new
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people
.
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I
have experience of this kind of work. When I was a student in the University, I was a tour guide for foreign visitors and
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told
them about historical places of Uzbekistan.

If you
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would like
me to attend an interview, I would be able to
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come
anytime convenient to you as I do want to a member of your
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companyI
would be grateful if you could consider me for this position.

Yours
faithfully
,
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Nargiza
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Raxmonova

IELTS letter Write a letter of application for a job of guide.

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
177 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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