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Write a letter in response to a job advertisement of a company, in your letter, • let them know that their advertisement has interested you, • tell them about your qualifications • and try to convince them that you fit in the position.

Write a letter in response to a job advertisement of a company, in your letter, • let them know that their advertisement has interested you, • tell them about your qualifications • and try to convince them that you fit in the position. NmNmy
Dear Sir/Ma’am, I am writing this letter to express my interest towards the recent job for the post of relationship manager that your organization had given in Hindustan Times. The position is dated 1 June 2021. I was looking for this position for sometime now and as soon as I got to know about it, I applied for it on your company website. Having said about my interest in the job offer, I would like to highlight that I am having prior work experience of 2 years in the same field. Talking about my qualification, I am B. Com and MBA from Panjab university, Chandigarh. My academic record has been excellent throughout my studies. Carriculum Vitae has also been updated on your website career sections which you can check for further reference. Hence, considering your job requirements and my career record, I feel that I will be a suitable candidate for your company openings. Therefore, you are requested to look into my profile. I will look forward to receiving a positive response from you. Yours faithfully,
Dear Sir/Ma’am,

I am writing this letter to express my interest towards the recent job for the post of relationship manager that your organization had
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given
in Hindustan Times. The position
is dated
1 June 2021. I was looking for this position for sometime
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now
and as
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soon
as I
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got
to know about it, I applied for it on your
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company
website.

Having said about my interest in the job offer, I would like to highlight that I am having prior work experience of 2 years in the same field. Talking about my qualification, I am B. Com and MBA from
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Panjab
university, Chandigarh. My academic record has been excellent throughout my studies.
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Carriculum
Vitae has
also
been updated
on your website career sections which you can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
for
further
reference.

Hence
, considering your job requirements and my career record, I feel that I will be a suitable candidate for your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
openings.
Therefore
, you
are requested
to look into my profile. I will look forward to receiving a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
response from you.

Yours
faithfully
,
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IELTS letter Write a letter in response to a job advertisement of a company, in your letter, • let them know that their advertisement has interested you, • tell them about your qualifications • and try to convince them that you fit in the position.

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  American English
5 paragraphs
176 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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