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Write a letter between 200 and 250 words according to the instructions below. You have just returned from a 6-month as an au-pair in an English-speaking country. Your experience had its ups and downs. A friend who is thinking of doing the same writes to ask you for advice. Reply to her referring to the following: · Details of your personal experience. · Qualities needed to be an au-pair. · Useful recommendations.

Write a letter between 200 and 250 words according to the instructions below. You have just returned from a 6-month as an au-pair in an English-speaking country. Your experience had its ups and downs. A friend who is thinking of doing the same writes to ask you for advice. Reply to her referring to the following: · Details of your personal experience. · Qualities needed to be an au-pair. · Useful recommendations. xmAo1
My dear Amy, How are you? I hope everything is well. I guess you are enjoying your free time before you decide on going to the UK as an au-per. I´ll try to give you my opinion about your question. As far as my personal experience, it was a lovely experience, and at the same time tiring. Because you are far away from your folks, and you miss them. Though, in my case, I took advantage of that and improved my English level and make plenty of friends around the world. Regarding the au-per qualities, I believe you have all the skills, that it is required to do it. You are easy-going and good-mannered. Those skills are the key when you have to deal with kids. Some times, they are rude to foreign au-per, and they´ll try to be naughty and spoilt with you. In these cases, patience will be the best tool to gain their confidence. Amy, I truly believe the best stuff that you can do is to do your best learning English because the parents speak fast. You´ll have to put in many things and share daily life at home with them. I hope you find useful my advice. Hugs and take care of yourself.
My dear Amy,

How are you? I hope everything is well. I guess you are enjoying your free time
before
you decide on going to the UK as an
au-per
.

I´ll
try to give you my opinion about your question.

As far as my personal experience, it was a lovely experience, and at the same time tiring.
Because
you are far away from your folks, and you miss them. Though, in my case, I took advantage of that and
improved
my English level and
make
plenty
of friends around the world.

Regarding the
au-per
qualities, I believe you have all the
skills
, that it
is required
to do it. You are easy-going and
good
-mannered. Those
skills
are the key when you
have to
deal with kids.
Some
times, they are rude to foreign
au-per
, and
they´ll
try to be naughty and
spoilt
with you. In these cases, patience will be the best tool to gain their confidence.

Amy, I
truly
believe the best stuff that you can do is to do your best learning English
because
the parents speak
fast
.
You´ll
have to
put in
many
things and share daily life at home with them.

I hope you find useful my advice.

Hugs and take care of yourself.
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IELTS letter Write a letter between 200 and 250 words according to the instructions below. You have just returned from a 6-month as an au-pair in an English-speaking country. Your experience had its ups and downs. A friend who is thinking of doing the same writes to ask you for advice. Reply to her referring to the following: · Details of your personal experience. · Qualities needed to be an au-pair. · Useful recommendations.

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  American English
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