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In addition to your full time job, you are taking 15 hour Computer Science course. You now find that you cannot continue with the course.

In addition to your full time job, you are taking 15 hour Computer Science course. You now find that you cannot continue with the course. Nr08d

Dear Mr. Franklin, Hope all is well at your end! As you know that I am working full time. I get up at 8am and my office starts at 10am. While the office hours are from 10am to 7pm but due to this pandemic, I am expected to work late. I do not even het time to prepare dinner and have to sleep with a glass of milk. Though, in the starting of the course, I thought I would be able to continue but it is getting really difficult now. This job is really important and I will not be able to give time to the Computer Science course. It would be really great if I can withdraw my admission till I have some time for this course. Also, please let me know if I can get my fees back that I had deposited for full 15 hour course or will it be adjusted further. Thanks & Regards,

Dear Mr. Franklin,

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Thanks & Regards, 