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Hi Alex, I am very sorry to inform you that I can no longer participate in your evening course because of the time conflict with my full-time job. As you probably have known, I am an auditor and this month is the peak of the audit season in which work deadlines keep me staying late at the office. Recently, I had been absent from your classes because it was impossible for me to work and study in two different places at the same time. Ideally, I would like to postpone the course to October. Until then, I will be available in the evening to join your course. If this is permitted, please inform me of the necessary procedure I need to do in order to transfer my course to a future one. Additionally, please let me know of any classes that will be offered in the fourth quarter of 2018 so I can register and resume my learning. I look forward to hearing from you. Best regards, Thanh Mai

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I look forward to hearing from you.

Best regards,

Thanh Mai