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Write a letter at least 150 words. You have just read a article in an international travel magazine which contain some information about your town that is incorrect. Correct the information in article why it is important and your suggestion

I am writing this letter regarding a mis information in your last month magazine. Firstly, I am really glade that yours magazine covered Karachi. This will help to increase tourism in the area. As I was reading your last month magazine and I come across an article above ANC fish point. ANC fish point is not in the boundary of Karachi. It is 150km away from Karachi. It comes in the Hyderabad. This mis guide information can lead to a lot of confusion in tourist consequently it will damage the reputation of the magazine. I already seen two tourist at the wrong address and asking about ABC fish point. Which was mentioned in your magazine. I will suggest you to write a apology on your next month magazine and inform readers related ABC fish point correct location. Mean time you can take back the last month magazine from the market. Thanks

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magazine
. Firstly
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 covered Karachi. This will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
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month
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magazine
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point
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magazine
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wrong
 address and asking about ABC fish You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstopmark
point
. “Which” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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. I will suggest you to write Use “an” instead of ‘a’ if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. ‘an article’, ‘an hour’.an
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 apology on your next
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month
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magazine
 and inform readers related ABC fish You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstopmark
point
 correct location. This adverb that is commonly used for introductory phrases is spelled as one word.Meantime
Mean time
 you can take back the last You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
month
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpamphletbookletjournalmanualdailybrochure
magazine
 from the market. Thanks