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Write a letter at least 150 words. You have just read a article in an international travel magazine which contain some information about your town that is incorrect. Correct the information in article why it is important and your suggestion

I am writing this letter regarding a mis information in your last month magazine. Firstly, I am really glade that yours magazine covered Karachi. This will help to increase tourism in the area. As I was reading your last month magazine and I come across an article above ANC fish point. ANC fish point is not in the boundary of Karachi. It is 150km away from Karachi. It comes in the Hyderabad. This mis guide information can lead to a lot of confusion in tourist consequently it will damage the reputation of the magazine. I already seen two tourist at the wrong address and asking about ABC fish point. Which was mentioned in your magazine. I will suggest you to write a apology on your next month magazine and inform readers related ABC fish point correct location. Mean time you can take back the last month magazine from the market. Thanks
I am writing this letter regarding a
mis information
in your last
month
magazine
.
Firstly
, I am
really
glade that yours
magazine
covered Karachi. This will
help
to increase tourism in the area. As I was reading your last
month
magazine
and I
come
across an article above ANC fish
point
. ANC fish
point
is not in the boundary of Karachi. It is
150km
away from Karachi. It
comes
in the Hyderabad. This
mis
guide information can lead to
a lot of
confusion in tourist
consequently
it will damage the reputation of the
magazine
. I already
seen
two tourist at the
wrong
address and asking about ABC fish
point
.
Which
was mentioned
in your
magazine
. I will suggest you to write
a
apology on your
next
month
magazine
and inform readers related ABC fish
point
correct location.
Mean time
you can take back the last
month
magazine
from the market. Thanks
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IELTS letter Write a letter at least 150 words. You have just read a article in an international travel magazine which contain some information about your town that is incorrect. Correct the information in article why it is important and your suggestion

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
150 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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