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Write a letter about your reccomendation letter for a friend

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Dear UWC, My name is Sam Kazehaya. I’m very glad to be a representative of my own best friend, Luong Kim Ngoc, in order to help her take a turning - point step to accomplish her ambition when she was young. I have known Ngoc for over 4 years. I first met her when we were in grade 7. As we had lots of hobbies and interests in common, we became best friends since then. To begin with, Ngoc is one of the most mature person that I have ever met. When my school groups hung out and went to many different places, I had had lots of chances to chat with her. I asked her questions about her life and her dream, her answers were quietly, looking like a grown-up, completely more different than her friends at the same age, without any dreams, goals or further ambition for their own life. She had already come up with a plan for the future. Not only was her maturity impressive, but also she is an independent person. She always stands at her feet and accomplishes everything on her own. Because her family does not have good living conditions, she has to earn money on her own to pay for her tuition and everything else.
Dear UWC,

My name is Sam
Kazehaya
. I’m
very
glad to be a representative of my
own
best friend,
Luong
Kim
Ngoc
, in order to
help
her take a turning
-
point step to accomplish her ambition when she was young. I have known
Ngoc
for over 4 years.

I
first
met her when we were in grade 7. As we had lots of hobbies and interests in common, we became best friends since then.

To
begin
with,
Ngoc
is one of the most mature person that I have ever met. When my school groups hung out and went to
many
different
places, I had had lots of chances to chat with her. I asked her questions about her life and her dream, her answers were
quietly
, looking like a grown-up, completely more
different
than
her friends at the same age, without any dreams, goals or
further
ambition for their
own
life. She had already
come
up with a plan for the future. Not
only
was her maturity impressive,
but
also
she is an independent person. She always stands at her feet and accomplishes everything on her
own
.
Because
her family does not have
good
living conditions, she
has to
earn money on her
own
to pay for her tuition and everything else.
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IELTS letter Write a letter about your reccomendation letter for a friend

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
213 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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