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Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Jung, Yuan-Yu and I would like to express my interest in applying for the Master of Science Degree in Interior and Spatial Design at Politecnico di Milano. I’ve always dreamed of becoming an extraordinarily talented interior designer and helping give back to my country. I believe that by studying here would set me miles ahead to reaching my goal. My passion for exploration of space possibility, arrangement and design started in my middle school life as I found that I had talent in it. From the result of the test named Differential Aptitude Tests, I got PR97 in Space Relations. Furthermore, since I graduated from high school, I chose architecture as my major, aiming at expanding my enthusiasm in this field. The four-year undergraduate program in Architecture at Chaoyang University of Technology formed the basic idea of the connection between space and humans. Besides, the program led me to have a greater interest in interior design. In 2017, when I was a member of Wa Jian interior design at my internship, my coworkers and I had a great achievement and won Merit Awards during this period not only on how to conduct official projects but also private commercial space design. I realized that I extremely want to be an interior designer and was willing to devote myself to each design project with no regrets. During my undergraduate study, to ensure my ability was good enough to enter the workforce of this field, I joined and passed two interior design certificates held by the nation. Since I graduated, I have been working as an interior design assistant in Kuan Pin design studio and Haoward Liao design located in Taipei, Taiwan. My work has helped me to comprehend the environment of interior design by thoroughly undergoing many design processes, such as the proposal of plans and materials’ collection. In addition, these experiences also have reminded me that I should improve myself all the time and absorb knowledge from different cultures. As a result, I decided to return to academia for further improvement in a foreign country. My ambition leads me to Politecnico di Milano, which has a great reputation in companies and education due to its high proportion of connections between courses and companies. Moreover, the program of Interior and Spatial Design here provides well-arranged courses for me to reconsider the possibility in space and humanity which will be my support on becoming an interior designer. Studying here may give me chances to exchange my opinion and expand my skills with foreign students in the atelier for technologies and interdisciplinary workshop in the first year. Also, in the second year of the master program, it will combine my theoretical and specialized education that with the contest design studio. I deeply believe that all these strong positives allow me to gain expert knowledge at the forefront of discovery and provide me with a milestone in my career in the future. What's more, I would have a chance to explore my potential capacity to become an outstanding designer and great world citizen through studying here. Besides, studying in this remarkable and international city, Milan, would have a huge impact on my career. The city will breed my insight by its abundant cultural connotations, and I would gain diverse opinions from people with foreign backgrounds who even have achievement in design. Additionally, It will be my honor to view the well-known fairs such as Milan Design Week that I could experience personally. I firmly believe that these merits would lead me to achieve my objective, and the adventure in Milan will broaden my horizon as well. I believe I would be a good fit for the program provided because of the highest intention of learning and wider insight that I have already gained. Therefore, I would love to be a part of Politecnico di Milano, as it would allow me to stretch my knowledge and experience ultimately to become an interior designer. I am looking forward to your reply. Thanks for your patience in reading and consideration. Yours sincerely.
Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is Jung,
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Yuan-Yu
and I would like to express my interest in applying for the Master of Science Degree in
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Interior
and Spatial
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Design
at
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Politecnico
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di
Milano. I’ve always dreamed of becoming an
extraordinarily
talented
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interior
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designer
and helping give back to my country. I
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believe
that by
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studying
here would set me miles ahead to reaching my goal.

My passion for exploration of
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space
possibility, arrangement and
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design
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started
in my middle school life as I found that I had talent in it. From the result of the
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test
named Differential Aptitude
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Tests
, I
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got
PR97 in
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Space
Relations.
Furthermore
, since I graduated from high school, I chose architecture as my major, aiming at expanding my enthusiasm in this field.

The four-year undergraduate
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program
in Architecture at
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Chaoyang
University of Technology formed the basic
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idea
of the
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connection between
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space
and humans.
Besides
, the
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program
led me to have a greater interest in
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interior
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design
. In 2017, when I was a member of
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Wa
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Jian
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interior
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design
at my internship, my coworkers and I had a great achievement and won Merit Awards during this period not
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only
on how to conduct official projects
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but
also
private commercial
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space
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design
. I realized that I
extremely
want to be an
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interior
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designer
and was willing to devote myself to each
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design
project with no regrets.

During my undergraduate study, to ensure my ability was
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good
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enough
to enter the workforce of this field, I
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joined
and passed two
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interior
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design
certificates held by the nation. Since I graduated, I have been working as an
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interior
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design
assistant in
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Kuan
Pin
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design
studio and
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Haoward
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Liao
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design
located in Taipei, Taiwan. My work has
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helped
me to comprehend the environment of
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interior
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design
by
thoroughly
undergoing
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many
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design
processes, such as the proposal of plans and materials’ collection.
In addition
, these experiences
also
have reminded me that I should
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improve
myself all the time and absorb knowledge from
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different
cultures.
As a result
, I decided to return to academia for
further
improvement in a foreign country.

My ambition leads me to
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Politecnico
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di
Milano, which has a great reputation in
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companies
and education due to its high proportion of connections between courses and
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companies
.
Moreover
, the
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program
of
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Interior
and Spatial
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Design
here provides well-arranged courses for me to reconsider the possibility in
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space
and humanity which will be my support on becoming an
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interior
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designer
.
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Studying
here may give me chances to exchange my opinion and expand my
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skills
with foreign students in the atelier for technologies and interdisciplinary workshop in the
first
year.
Also
, in the second year of the master
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program
, it will combine my theoretical and specialized education that with the contest
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design
studio. I
deeply
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believe
that all these strong positives
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allow
me to gain expert knowledge at the forefront of discovery and provide me with a milestone in my career in the future. What's more, I would have a chance to explore my potential capacity to become an outstanding
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designer
and great world citizen through
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studying
here.

Besides
,
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studying
in this remarkable and international city, Milan, would have a huge impact on my career. The city will breed my insight by its abundant cultural connotations, and I would gain diverse opinions from
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people
with foreign backgrounds who even have achievement in
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design
.
Additionally
, It will be my honor to view the well-known fairs such as Milan
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Design
Week that I could experience
personally
. I
firmly
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believe
that these merits would lead me to achieve my objective, and the adventure in Milan will broaden my horizon
as well
.

I
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believe
I would be a
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good
fit for the
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program
provided
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because
of the highest intention of learning and wider insight that I have already gained.
Therefore
, I would
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love
to be a part of
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Politecnico
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di
Milano, as it would
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allow
me to stretch my knowledge and experience
ultimately
to become an
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interior
designer.

I am looking forward to your reply. Thanks for your patience in reading and consideration.

Yours
sincerely
.
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5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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