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Apologies on behalf of new rommie

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Dear Mr. Smith, I am writing this letter to apologise on behalf of my new rommie for creating disturbance in neighbourhood. Since last month my old roomate left the apartment due to job relocation, i let new flatmate to move in. My new housemate is an upcoming musician. Recently he have been preparing for his music audition because of which he is practing all day and sometimes during night. I can understand that it is proving to be a peace breaker for everyone living close to our apartment. Admittedly, you being right on complaining the secretary of apartment reagarding the disruption, i feel sorry for this inconvenience and would like to make amends in this. In order to overcome this problem, me and my homemate have come to a conclusion that he will be doing his music training during day time when everyone is at work. Moreover he also booked a sound proof room for practicing on weekends. Once again, i am sorry about the trouble you faced and assure you of proving a good neighbour in future. Yours Sincerely, Manpreet Kaur
Dear Mr. Smith,

I am writing this letter to
apologise
on behalf of my new
rommie
for creating disturbance in
neighbourhood
. Since last month my
old
roomate
left
the apartment due to job relocation,
i
let
new flatmate to
move
in.

My new housemate is an upcoming musician. Recently he
have
been preparing for his music audition
because
of which he is
practing
all day and
sometimes
during night. I can understand that it is proving to be a peace breaker for everyone living close to our apartment.

Admittedly
, you being right on complaining the secretary of apartment
reagarding
the disruption,
i
feel sorry for this inconvenience and would like to
make
amends in this.

In order to overcome this problem, me and my
homemate
have
come
to a conclusion that he will be doing his music training during day time when everyone is at work.
Moreover
he
also
booked a sound proof room for practicing on weekends.

Once again,
i
am sorry about the trouble you faced and assure you of proving a
good
neighbour
in future
.

Yours
Sincerely
,

Manpreet
Kaur
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IELTS letter Apologies on behalf of new rommie

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  American English
8 paragraphs
181 words
6.0
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