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Job application for credit officer

Job application for credit officer 26W8M
Dear Sir, I am writing in regard to the job application in reference to your vacancy for the position of credit officer. I am currently working at NMB Bank in the position of junior officer. I have total experience of five more years and is an expert in this field. Since the inception of the job i am in the credit field and has got overall knowledge of credit. As a credit officer i have been doing all sort of loans on different segments like retail, sme, msme etc. We have got a portfolio of 100 million and more and have been planning double it by novemember end. As i have all the qualities and experience that suits the required position, i hereby apply for the job thinking myself as a bonafied candidate. Hope to receive your positive response soon. Yours faithfully Narayan Dhungana
Dear Sir,

I am writing in regard to the job application in reference to your vacancy for the position of credit officer.

I am
currently
working at
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NMB
Bank in the position of junior officer.
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I
have total experience of five more years and is an expert in this field. Since the inception of the job
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i
am in the credit field and has
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got
overall
knowledge of credit.

As a credit officer
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i
have been doing all sort of loans on
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different
segments like retail,
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sme
,
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msme
etc. We have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
a portfolio of 100 million and more and have been planning double it by
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novemember
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
.

As
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i
have all the qualities and experience that suits the required position,
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i
hereby apply for the job thinking myself as a
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bonafied
candidate.

Hope to receive your
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positive
response
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soon
.

Yours
faithfully


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Narayan
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Dhungana
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IELTS letter Job application for credit officer

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
143 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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