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letter to manager recommending a person as best employee of the year 1. who 2. why 3. characteristics of best employee

letter to manager recommending a person as best employee of the year 1. who 2. why 3. characteristics of best employee 6lQOG
Dear Mr. John, I am writing this letter to nominate an employee for the award " Best employee of the year". We nominate Shreya, from the development team, on behalf of my entire team for the reward. Firstly, considering the overall year performance, she truly deserves, she worked really hard to accomplish the project before the deadline. Moreover, have the capability to handle the work pressure and come up with an accurate resolution in no time. In addition, Shreya helped junior employees to overcome difficulties in work and did a smooth knowledge transfer to enhance their skills. I believe she is the right person for the award. In my opinion, there are many characteristics to be a good employee, such as good learning capabilities, zeal to work as a team member, right use of skills and experience for company growth and respectful attitude towards company policies and workplace. I have seen all these qualities in her. I hope to hearing from you soon. Yours Sincerely,
Dear Mr. John,

I am writing this letter to nominate an
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We nominate Shreya, from the development team, on behalf of my entire team for the reward.
Firstly
, considering the
overall
year performance, she
truly
deserves, she worked
really
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hard
to accomplish the project
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before
the deadline.
Moreover
, have the capability to handle the work pressure and
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come
up with an accurate resolution in no time.
In addition
, Shreya
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helped
junior
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employees
to overcome difficulties in work and did a smooth knowledge transfer to enhance their
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skills
. I believe she is the right person for the award.

In my opinion, there are
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many
characteristics to be a
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good
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employee
, such as
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good
learning capabilities, zeal to work as a team member, right
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of
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skills
and experience for
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company
growth and respectful attitude towards
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company
policies and workplace. I have
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seen
all these qualities in her.

I hope to hearing from you
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Yours
Sincerely
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IELTS letter letter to manager recommending a person as best employee of the year 1. who 2. why 3. characteristics of best employee

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
165 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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