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Write a four-paragraph letter of 150-170 words to your exchange student

Write a four-paragraph letter of 150-170 words to your exchange student GJrQe
Dear Lina, My name is Thuy Trang and I’m 19 years old. I’m a 2nd year student at Danang University of Foreign Languages. I was born and raised in Nghe An province, Nghe An is a very large province located in North Central Vietnam. Nghe An is a peaceful countryside, fresh air and a land that has produced many famous historical figures, academics, scientists, and famous cultural figures such as Mai Hac De, poet Ho Xuan Huong and especially is the homeland, the place where President Ho Chi Minh's umbilical cord was cut off. Nghe An is a charming land of mountains, you can enjoy the beautiful scenery here such as Lam River, Hong Linh mountain, Cua Lo beach, . . . and enjoy some famous specialties here such as Nhut Thanh Chuong, Do Luong dry cake, Vinh eel porridge, . . . Nghe An people are sincere, honest, and rustic working all year round, they are very friendly with tourists visiting this place. I have many hobbies such as watching movies, reading books and listening to music. I often listen to US UK music to improve my English skills, it helps me a lot in my English learning career. I don't know what else to write so I'll end it here. Please write to me soon and I hope to see you soon and hear from you about your life and if possible I will take you to visit my hometown. Best wish, Trang
Dear Lina,

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Thuy
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Trang
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. I’m a 2nd year student at
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Danang
University of Foreign Languages. I
was born
and raised in
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Nghe
An province,
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Nghe
An is a
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very
large province located in North Central Vietnam.

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An is a peaceful countryside, fresh air and a land that has produced
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many
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historical figures, academics, scientists, and
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famous
cultural figures such as Mai
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Hac
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, poet Ho
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Xuan
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Huong
and
especially
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Nghe
An is a charming land of mountains, you can enjoy the
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beautiful
scenery here such as Lam River, Hong
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Linh
mountain,
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Cua
Lo beach
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and
enjoy
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famous
specialties here such as
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Thanh
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Chuong
, Do
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Luong
dry cake,
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Vinh
eel porridge
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Nghe
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people
are sincere, honest, and rustic working all year round, they are
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very
friendly with tourists visiting this place.

I have
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many
hobbies such as watching movies, reading books and listening to music. I
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often
listen to US UK music to
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improve
my English
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skills
, it
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helps
me a lot in my English learning career.

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I
don't know what else to write
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so
I'll
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end
it here.
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Please
write to me
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soon
and I hope to
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see
you
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soon
and hear from you about your life and if possible I will take you to visit my hometown.

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wish,

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IELTS letter Write a four-paragraph letter of 150-170 words to your exchange student

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
244 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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