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Write a four-paragraph letter of 150-170 words to a friend who has moved away from your home town

Write a four-paragraph letter of 150-170 words to a friend who has moved away from your home town KlMoL
Dear Tara! Sorry that I didn't write letter to you for a last few weeks but I was so busy, and so many things happened! About 2 weeks ago we ( me, my parents and my sister) moved to other city - Zakopane. It's beautiful place, big amazing mountains which I can see from my window. The air is clear, people are nice and there is lots of forests, small rivers and green meadows. I'm going to new school, have new class mates, it's okay. Im so happy that we moved, but also sad because I left all my friends in Do you remember Kasia? She had 18th birthday party week ego. My will be soon aswell. I wish you will be there, and I want to invite you here and show all that beautiful views! My younger sister still teasing me, as always, nothing's change from time you were there And how is your life going? Is everything fine? I hope we will see each other soon, I'm waiting for your answer. Miss you.
Dear Tara!

Sorry that I didn't write letter to you for a last few weeks
but
I was
so
busy, and
so
many
things happened!

About 2 weeks ago we
(
me, my parents and my sister)
moved
to other city
-
Zakopane. It's
beautiful
place,
big
amazing mountains which I can
see
from my window. The air is
clear
,
people
are nice and there is lots of forests,
small
rivers and green meadows. I'm going to new school, have new
class
mates, it's okay.
Im
so
happy that we
moved
,
but
also
sad
because
I
left
all my friends in Do you remember Kasia? She had 18th birthday party week ego. My will be
soon
aswell
. I wish you will be there, and I want to invite you here and
show
all that
beautiful
views!

My younger sister
still
teasing me, as always, nothing's
change
from time you were there

And how is your life going? Is everything fine? I hope we will
see
each other
soon
, I'm waiting for your answer. Miss you.
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IELTS letter Write a four-paragraph letter of 150-170 words to a friend who has moved away from your home town

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
175 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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