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Write a four-paragraph letter of 150-170 words to a friend who has moved away from your home town

Write a four-paragraph letter of 150-170 words to a friend who has moved away from your home town KlMoL

Dear Tara! Sorry that I didn't write letter to you for a last few weeks but I was so busy, and so many things happened! About 2 weeks ago we ( me, my parents and my sister) moved to other city - Zakopane. It's beautiful place, big amazing mountains which I can see from my window. The air is clear, people are nice and there is lots of forests, small rivers and green meadows. I'm going to new school, have new class mates, it's okay. Im so happy that we moved, but also sad because I left all my friends in Do you remember Kasia? She had 18th birthday party week ego. My will be soon aswell. I wish you will be there, and I want to invite you here and show all that beautiful views! My younger sister still teasing me, as always, nothing's change from time you were there And how is your life going? Is everything fine? I hope we will see each other soon, I'm waiting for your answer. Miss you.

Dear Tara!

Sorry that I didn't write letter to you for a last few weeks This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 busy, and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 things happened!

About 2 weeks ago we Don't put a space after the opening parenthesis(
( 
me, my parents and my sister) This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 to other city Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.—
-
 Zakopane. It's This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
 place, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 amazing mountains which I can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 from my window. The air is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 are nice and there is lots of forests, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 rivers and green meadows. I'm going to new school, have new This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
 mates, it's okay. Possible spelling mistake foundI'm
Im
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 happy that we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 sad This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 all my friends in Do you remember Kasia? She had 18th birthday party week ego. My will be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
Possible spelling mistake found.swellAspella swellas well
aswell
. I wish you will be there, and I want to invite you here and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 all that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
 views!

My younger sister still
 teasing me, as always, nothing's This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 from time you were there

And how is your life going? Is everything fine? I hope we will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 each other This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
, I'm waiting for your answer. Miss you. 