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Letter to hotel manager complaining about the food

Letter to hotel manager complaining about the food eAX3x

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to draw your attention towards the delay in serving food at the official meeting, which I organized for my company at your hotel. I would like to start with mentioning that the arrangement done by your staff in terms of conference room’s chairs, stage and microphones setup was as per the expectations. All the employees were comfortably sitting and were able to participate in the activities organized. However, some employees complained about the time your catering staff took to serve the food on their tables and when the food was served, it was not hot enough. As my company always setup meetings and parties at your hotel, I would like to make suggestions to improve the services such as having additional waiters when there is a large gathering. Also, you should not only check the food’s quality but also inspect whether it is ready to eat or not. I hope you would be able to consider the above suggestions and make the required improvements. Yours faithfully, Sam

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to draw your attention towards the delay in serving You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
food
 at the official meeting, which I organized for my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 at your hotel.

I would like to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 with mentioning that the arrangement done by your staff in terms of conference room’s chairs, stage and microphones setup was as per the expectations. All the employees were comfortably
 sitting and were able to participate in the activities organized.

However
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 employees complained about the time your catering staff took to serve the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
food
 on their tables and when the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
food
was served
, it was not hot This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
.

As my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 always setup meetings and parties at your hotel, I would like to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 suggestions to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 the services such as having additional waiters when there is a large gathering. Also
, you should not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
food’s
 quality This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 inspect whether it is ready to eat or not.

I hope you would be able to consider the above suggestions and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 the required improvements.

Yours faithfully
,

Sam