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You are organising a family party. Write a letter to your friends.

You are organising a family party. Write a letter to your friends. 2RM5J
Dear Nelly I am writing to invite to you my daughterʼs birthday party for the afternoon of Monday 23rd October. On this day my daughter Lisa will be 12-year-old girl, and it will be her anniversary party, thatʼs why she wants to invite her all classmates, friends, and causins. I know you are really great cook and decorator among my friends. When I have your delicious dishes, I enjoy them. Moreover, your decorations are absolutaly wonderful, especially different coloured balloons. Iʼm planning that weʼll prepare big two storey cakes, some biscuits and salads, and my favourite meal turkey. Furthermore, you will decorate our yard with shaped balloons. Please, come earlier on this day. See you soon. Love Ann.
Dear
Nelly


I am writing to invite to you my
daughterʼs
birthday party for the afternoon of Monday 23rd October.

On this day my daughter Lisa will be 12-year-
old
girl, and it will be her anniversary party,
thatʼs
why she wants to invite her all classmates, friends, and
causins
.

I know you are
really
great cook and decorator among my friends. When I have your delicious dishes, I enjoy them.
Moreover
, your decorations are
absolutaly
wonderful,
especially
different
coloured
balloons.

Iʼm
planning that
weʼll
prepare
big
two
storey
cakes,
some
biscuits and salads, and my
favourite
meal turkey.
Furthermore
, you will decorate our yard with shaped balloons.

Please
,
come
earlier on this day.

See
you
soon
.

Love
Ann.
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IELTS letter You are organising a family party. Write a letter to your friends.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
118 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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