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You are inviting to your friend to the party.

You are inviting to your friend to the party. JwrLw

Dear Nelly I am writing to invite to you my daughterʼs birthday party for the afternoon of Monday 23rd October. On this day my daughter Lisa will be 12-year-old girl, and it will be her anniversary party, thatʼs why she wants to invite a great number of children, such as her all classmates, friends, and causins. I know you are really great cook, you have amazing fantasy to make parties, and also you are great decorator among my friends. When I have your delicious dishes, I enjoy them, they are always delicious. Moreover, your decorations are absolutaly wonderful, especially different coloured balloons. Iʼm planning that weʼll prepare big two storey cakes, some biscuits and salads, and my favourite meal turkey. Furthermore, you will decorate our yard with shaped balloons. Please, come earlier on this day. See you soon. Love Ann.

Dear Nelly


I am writing to invite to you my Possible spelling mistake found.daughters
daughterʼs
 birthday party for the afternoon of Monday 23rd October.

On this day my daughter Lisa will be 12-year-This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 girl, and it will be her anniversary party, Possible spelling mistake found.thatthanksThameshatshatestheirs
thatʼs
 why she wants to invite a great number of children, such as her all classmates, friends, and Possible spelling mistake found.causingcousins
causins
.

I know you are really
 great cook, you have amazing fantasy to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 parties, and also
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are great
 decorator among my friends. When I have your delicious dishes, I enjoy them, they are always delicious. Moreover
, your decorations are Possible spelling mistake found.absolutely
absolutaly
 wonderful, especially
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
Possible spelling mistake. 'coloured' is British English.colored
coloured
 balloons.

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Iʼm
 planning that Possible spelling mistake found.wellWeill
weʼll
 prepare This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 two Possible spelling mistake. 'storey' is British English.story
storey
 cakes, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 biscuits and salads, and my Possible spelling mistake. 'favourite' is British English.favorite
favourite
 meal turkey. Furthermore
, you will decorate our yard with shaped balloons.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 earlier on this day.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
See
 you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
Love
 Ann. 