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Hi Alice, How are you? Hope you well at home. I have a great news to share! My younger brother has passed the university exam! For real. He want to have some money before she move to the university. So he doing a commission to earn money and experience. We were going to celebrate this at home for safe! On the contrary, I'm not really happy cause without her, I would be lonely and no one talk to me. How about you? Do you have any good news? Do you like to be at home like this? Back not soon, Trinh

Hi Alice, How are you? Hope you well at home. I have a great news to share! My younger brother has passed the university exam! For real. He want to have some money before she move to the university. So he doing a commission to earn money and experience. We were going to celebrate this at home for safe! On the contrary, I'm not really happy cause without her, I would be lonely and no one talk to me. How about you? Do you have any good news? Do you like to be at home like this? Back not soon, Trinh pKAXa
Hi Alice, How are you? Hope you well at home. I have a great news to share! My younger brother has passed the university exam! For real. He want to have some money before she move to the university. So he doing a commission to earn money and experience. We were going to celebrate this at home for safe! On the contrary, I'm not really happy cause without her, I would be lonely and no one talk to me. How about you? Do you have any good news? Do you like to be at home like this? Back not soon, Trinh
Hi Alice,

How are you? Hope you well at home.

I have
Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply "great news".
a great news
to share! My younger brother has passed the university exam! For real. He
The pronoun 'He' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "wants", "wanted".
want
to have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
money
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
she
The pronoun 'she' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "moves", "moved".
move
to the university.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
Did you mean "he's doing", "he is doing", or "he was doing"?
he doing
a commission to earn money and experience. We were going to celebrate this at home for safe!
On the contrary
, I'm not
really
happy cause without her, I would be lonely and no one talk to me. How about you? Do you have any
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
news? Do you like to be at home like this?

Back not
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
,

Possible spelling mistake found.
Trinh
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IELTS letter Hi Alice, How are you? Hope you well at home. I have a great news to share! My younger brother has passed the university exam! For real. He want to have some money before she move to the university. So he doing a commission to earn money and experience. We were going to celebrate this at home for safe! On the contrary, I'm not really happy cause without her, I would be lonely and no one talk to me. How about you? Do you have any good news? Do you like to be at home like this? Back not soon, Trinh

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  American English
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100 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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