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A local company is looking dor people to do part time work. you would like to work at the company in summer.

A local company is looking dor people to do part time work. you would like to work at the company in summer. okaD3
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to apply for the part-time network assistant vacancy that your company is looking for. I belive that this job is the most convenient option for me since I live near to the company area, additionaly I am an network engineering student at USTHB which make your company the best plcae to have more experience. I consider myself the best candidate because I worked in HNW company for 8 months, it was a temprary job but I gained a lot of experience. Furthermore, this vacancy is relating directly to my University courses. My next holiday is on the next July so I would have time from Monday to Friday. However, I can also work during my studies all the days starting from 6: 30 pm. Thank you for your consideration. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Rami RADJRAD
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to apply for the part-time network assistant vacancy that your
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company
is looking for.

Did you mean "I believe"?
I belive
that this job is the most convenient option for me since I
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live
near to the
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company
area,
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additionaly
I am
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an
network engineering student at
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USTHB
which
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make
your
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company
the best
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plcae
to have more experience.

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I
consider myself the best candidate
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because
I worked in
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HNW
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company
for 8 months, it was a
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temprary
job
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but
I gained
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a lot of
experience.
Furthermore
, this vacancy is relating
directly
to my University courses.

My
next
holiday is on the
next
July
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so
I would have time from Monday to Friday.
However
, I can
also
work during my studies all the days starting from 6: 30 pm.

Thank you for your consideration. I am looking forward to hearing from you
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soon
.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Rami
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RADJRAD
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IELTS letter A local company is looking dor people to do part time work. you would like to work at the company in summer.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
150 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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