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You recently visited the sports centre advertised below. Write a review about it for your English school magazine.

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Dear Sir/ Madam, it's a pleasure to write this letter to you. Recently I had seen advertisement in a newspaper about new sports center in your city. I was superbly happy to visit this place. To begin with, I found all modern sports equipment's there and the quality of them is very impressive. Furthermore, all the things are clean and well placed. The environment of the center is friendly specially the manager.
Dear Sir/ Madam, it's a pleasure to write this letter to you. Recently I had
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seen
advertisement in a newspaper about new sports center in your city. I was
superbly
happy to visit this place. To
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begin
with, I found all modern sports equipment's there and the quality of them is
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impressive.
Furthermore
, all the things are clean and
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well placed
. The environment of the center is friendly
specially
the manager.
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IELTS letter You recently visited the sports centre advertised below. Write a review about it for your English school magazine.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
72 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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