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Write a complaint letter to the manager of the market about the problem you faced with the washing machine which you have bought recently

Write a complaint letter to the manager of the market about the problem you faced with the washing machine which you have bought recently 7amDk
Dear Sir/ MadamI am writing to complain about the washimg machine wich I have bought from your shop. On December 25 I visited your shopnand bought a washing machine which seemd cheaper and had more functions then others. While speaking with your assistant she assured me thet the household appliences of your shop are in a good quality and showed me certificates. I really was happy as I thought I have found suitabe washing item for my demend. Unfortunately, after the second use of the machine I realized that the clothes which I used the machine to wash were not cleaned. At first I thought that I used the wrong powder and chaned it to more expencive one but there was no result. After all I understood that the machine was not heating the water as it was set up. As i have quaranty certificate I demend you to send one of your qualified master to repare the item or change it into new one. Seeing forward your solving the problem possitivly. Otherwise I will have to take legel action. Yourth sinseralyZ
Dear Sir/
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MadamI
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am
writing to complain about the
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washimg
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machine
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wich
I have
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bought
from your shop. On December 25 I visited your
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shopnand
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bought
a washing
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machine
which
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seemd
cheaper and had more functions
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then
others. While speaking with your assistant she assured me
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thet
the household
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appliences
of your shop are in a
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good
quality and
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showed
me certificates. I
really
was happy as I
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thought
I have found
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suitabe
washing item for my
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demend
. Unfortunately, after the second
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use
of the
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machine
I realized that the clothes which I
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used
the
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machine
to wash were not cleaned. At
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first I
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thought
that I
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used
the
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wrong
powder and
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chaned
it to more
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expencive
one
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but
there was no result.
After all
I understood that the
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machine
was not heating the water as it
was set
up. As
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i
have
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quaranty
certificate I
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demend
you to
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send
one of your qualified master to
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repare
the item or
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change
it into new one. Seeing forward your solving the problem
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possitivly
.
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Otherwise
I will
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have to
take
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legel
action.
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Yourth
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sinseralyZ
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IELTS letter Write a complaint letter to the manager of the market about the problem you faced with the washing machine which you have bought recently

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  American English
1 paragraphs
181 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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