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Invitation letter to manager of a company

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Dear Mrs John, I am writing to invite you for seminar holding in our company on 6th June. The aim of the seminar is to be aware of safety issues while become in the office. Due to the fact numerous employees do not follow safety rules even though they are introduced through the manager who is responsible for this point. Consequently, most workers are being injured by this action. I would be grateful if you come and give not only the ideas but also your opinions about this issue as a safety manager by making a presentation or oral speech advice. Furthermore, your company is good at safeting which can become bright example for others with holding measures. In addition, the next subject I would like to talk about is to teach company members how to use safety rules when they are at work. If you are able to do that please let me know what recourses you would need so that I can provide them for you. I would be grateful if you could accept our invitation. Yours sincerely, Jane Eyre.
Dear Mrs John,

I am writing to invite you for seminar holding in our
company
on 6th June.

The aim of the seminar is to be aware of
safety
issues while become in the office. Due to the fact numerous employees do not follow
safety
rules
even though
they
are introduced
through the manager who is responsible for this point.
Consequently
, most workers are
being injured
by this action.

I would be grateful if you
come
and give not
only
the
ideas
but
also
your opinions about this issue as a
safety
manager by making a presentation or oral speech advice.
Furthermore
, your
company
is
good
at
safeting
which can become bright example for others with holding measures.

In addition
, the
next
subject I would like to talk about is to teach
company
members how to
use
safety
rules
when they are at work. If you are able to do that
please
let
me know what recourses you would need
so
that I can provide them for you.

I would be grateful if you could accept our invitation.

Yours
sincerely
,

Jane Eyre.
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IELTS letter Invitation letter to manager of a company

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
182 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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