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Reflection essay (abaout school)

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Hello everyone. I’m Assel. I am student of IQHSB. In this school, I went through the IQanat Olympiad. I was very happy when I found out that I had passed. I immediately told this news with my parents. When we looked at pictures of my future school together, it was so cool. I really wanted to arrive quickly. But I was so worried because it was quarantine time. Despite all the difficulties, we are here now. Before moving, I wrote all my plans on a diary. And now I am in the process of fulfilling these plans. When I arrived at school, I did not feel any inconvenience. Because the teachers welcomed us so warmly. For the first days I was so surprised. I have never seen such a warm relationship between the students and the teacher before. They helped us in everything. The most amazing thing was that our director himself washed the floor in the Student House during the first days. He's too good a man. And I think I've changed in a good way. I not only got theoretical knowledge. Seeing many educated and adequate people, I corrected myself. And speaking about studies, this is the first time I've seen such a training format. I have developed a special interest in learning. In a short time, I improved my level of English. For this I want to thank my teachers. They are the best. For the summer I am planning to spend time with my family and friends. And I want to lick my eyes. And of course, I will prepare for the university. I will improve my level of English further.
Hello everyone. I’m
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Assel
. I am student of
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IQHSB
. In this school, I went through the
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IQanat
Olympiad. I was
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very
happy when I found out that I had passed. I immediately
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told
this news with my parents. When we looked at pictures of my future school together, it was
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so
cool. I
really
wanted to arrive
quickly
.
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But
I was
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so
worried
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because
it was quarantine
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time
. Despite all the difficulties, we are here
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now
.
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Before
moving, I wrote all my plans on a diary. And
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now
I am in the process of fulfilling these plans. When I arrived at school, I did not feel any inconvenience.
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Because
the teachers welcomed us
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so
warmly
. For the
first
days I was
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so
surprised. I have never
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
such a warm relationship between the students and the teacher
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
. They
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helped
us in everything. The most amazing thing was that our director himself washed the floor in the Student
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House
during the
first
days. He's too
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good
a
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man
. And I
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think
I've
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changed
in a
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good
way. I not
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only
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got
theoretical knowledge. Seeing
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many
educated and adequate
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people
, I corrected myself. And speaking about studies, this is the
first
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time
I've
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
such a training format. I have developed a special interest in learning. In a short
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improved
my level of English. For this I want to thank my teachers. They are the best. For the summer I am planning to spend
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
with my family and friends. And I want to lick my eyes. And
of course
, I will prepare for the university. I will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
my level of English
further
.
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IELTS letter Reflection essay (abaout school)

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
275 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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