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Cover letter apply to Food and Beverage Attendent position

Cover letter apply to Food and Beverage Attendent position 159pW
Dear Food and Beverage Department, Having known that Novotel is the heritage brand of Accor and was the first hotel brand in Europe to bring a high quality, standardized, modern hotel offering with a customer-centric focus, I would be honored if being given an opportunity of contributing to the future development of the corporation as a F&B Attendant. I am pleased to find your job description for the F&B Attendant position on Careers. accor. com. I believe that my enthusiam and accumulated knowledge would be indispensable for F&B team I have a Diploma Certificate of Hotel Administration from Hanoi University with A+ mark in Hotel Management subject. I have gained invaluable knowledge and skills within 4 years of university. Critical thinking, communication and teamwork skills are among the most expensive lessons I have received from university and working experience. These ability, coupled with a passion for the field, are well-aligned with the high requirements for the F&B Attendant role. I am able to easily responsive and adaptable to my surroundings. My verbal communication skills and positive attitude makes me an effective communicator with my customers. Given the opportunity, I would be able to become an excellent representative of your F&B team. Please consider the enclosed resume to know more about my background, skills and passion. I look forward to have an opportunity of discussing further and how I can contribute to the ongoing development of hotel.
Dear Food and Beverage Department,

Having known that
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Novotel
is the heritage brand of Accor and was the
first
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hotel
brand in Europe to bring a high quality, standardized, modern
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hotel
offering with a customer-centric focus, I would
be honored
if being
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given
an opportunity of contributing to the future development of the corporation as
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a
F&B Attendant. I am
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pleased
to find your job description for the F&B Attendant position on Careers.
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accor
.
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com
. I believe that my
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enthusiam
and accumulated knowledge would be indispensable for F&B
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team


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I
have a Diploma Certificate of
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Hotel
Administration from Hanoi University with A+ mark in
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Hotel
Management subject.
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I
have gained invaluable knowledge and
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skills
within 4 years of university. Critical thinking, communication and teamwork
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skills
are among the most expensive lessons I have received from university and working experience.
Did you mean "this ability" or "These abilities"?
These ability
, coupled with a passion for the field, are well-aligned with the high requirements for the F&B Attendant role.

I am able to
easily
responsive and adaptable to my surroundings. My verbal communication
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skills
and
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positive
attitude
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makes
me an effective communicator with my customers.
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Given
the opportunity, I would be able to become an excellent representative of your F&B team.
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Please
consider the enclosed resume to know more about my background,
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skills
and passion. I look forward
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to have
an opportunity of discussing
further
and how I can contribute to the ongoing development of
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hotel
.

IELTS letter Cover letter apply to Food and Beverage Attendent position

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
236 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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