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You have decided for a job as an English teacher that was advertised in the April edition of the newspaper Muzrabat.This ad was posted by Mr Nurmurod Jumayev,director of the school.

You have decided for a job as an English teacher that was advertised in the April edition of the newspaper Muzrabat. This ad was posted by Mr Nurmurod Jumayev, director of the school. 0AQAq
Dear Sir Jumayev, I am writing to apply for a job of an English teacher at your specialised school at your specialised school which I saw advertised in 'Muzrabot'. I think I have many of the necessary qualifications needed for this job. I have Bachelor's degree in Termiz State University and have worked with young children teaching English. I am presently working in school No 17 but I am going to find a job that will allow me to develop my skills. I am an energetic and responsible employee and I feel that I am well-qualified for this job. I look forward to hearing you. Yours sincerelyUgiloy Bozorova
Dear Sir
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Jumayev
, I am writing to apply for a
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job
of an English teacher at your
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specialised
school at your
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specialised
school which I
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saw
advertised in '
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Muzrabot
'. I
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think
I have
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many
of the necessary qualifications needed for this
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job
. I have Bachelor's degree in
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Termiz
State University and have worked with young children teaching English.
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I
am
presently
working in school No 17
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but
I am going to find a
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job
that will
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allow
me to develop my
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skills
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am an energetic and responsible employee and I feel that I am well-qualified for this
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job
.
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I
look forward to hearing you. Yours
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sincerelyUgiloy
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Bozorova

IELTS letter You have decided for a job as an English teacher that was advertised in the April edition of the newspaper Muzrabat. This ad was posted by Mr Nurmurod Jumayev, director of the school.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
107 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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