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You have recently raised a problem at the airport and improve your airport helped you with this matte. Write a letter to the airport manager and say what was the problem How did that person help you suggest the manager to praise this employee in someway

You have recently raised a problem at the airport and improve your airport helped you with this matte. Write a letter to the airport manager and say what was the problem How did that person help you suggest the manager to praise this employee in someway VOGQ
Dear SirMy name is Santos and my family and I have just returned from two week vacation to sylhet. I am writing this letter to thank. One of your employer American girl who help me at the airport Let me explain the situation as you know salute international Airport hectic at the moment majority of people went different place. Spent their holiday. As well as me and my family too. Will i came the airport Suddenly I have checked my luggage is exchanged with another person I have complained of airport authorities. They suggest me about mr Kamrul Then we meet with him, therefore, he helped us to search this luggage, Finally we have got our luggage. Mr kamrul is a honest person, He has a good personality I have added that you had an award for best employee this month so I have to request to you, it would be very nice, if you propose his name for best employee of this month. Your faithfullyTaj
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SirMy
name is Santos and my family and I have
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just
returned from
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two week
vacation to
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sylhet
. I am writing this letter to thank. One of your employer American girl who
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help
me at the airport

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Let
me
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explain
the situation as you know salute international Airport hectic at the moment
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majority of
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people
went
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different
place. Spent their holiday.
As well
as me and my family too. Will
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i
came the airport
Suddenly
I have
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checked
my luggage
is exchanged
with another person I have complained of airport authorities. They suggest me about
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mr
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Kamrul
Then we
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meet
with him,
therefore
, he
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helped
us to search this luggage,
Finally
we have
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got
our luggage.

Mr
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kamrul
is
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a
honest person, He has a
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good
personality I have
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added
that you had an award for best employee this month
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so
I
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have to
request to you, it would be
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very
nice, if you propose his name for best employee of this month.

Your
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faithfullyTaj
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IELTS letter You have recently raised a problem at the airport and improve your airport helped you with this matte. Write a letter to the airport manager and say what was the problem How did that person help you suggest the manager to praise this employee in someway

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  American English
3 paragraphs
165 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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