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would like to tell you about my school. . . . . . . . . . Awp9X
Hi guys, Welcome to my school. If you are a freshman or are visiting this school for the first time, I can show you around my school, like thecampus, areas for study, the library, and school departments. Let me introduce something about myself. I've been studying at this school for 2 years and I majorin auditor here. So I think I should take you to the library or areas for study. First, I'd like to tell you about my school. As you know, there are so many basic schools. and you are visiting a base that is located in district 10. Exactly, it is 279 Nguyen Tri Phuong Street. As I mentioned before, I would take you to a place where students always go to do assignments or look for documentaries. Yeah, that is the library with the spacious rooms and modern facilities. Students can easily do whatever they want. It's very comfortable to focus on the deadline here. When you go to the library, you will meet a person who manages books here and will show you how to use them. Her name is Ha. Next, I would take you to the finance department of the school. You will also see a person who keeps money and manages them carefully. The last, if you go to the main room of the block A, you will encounter a  teacher who is the head of this school. Exactly that's professor'su dinh hung'. Overall, all of them are very approachable and accommodating. You can ask them questions about assignments, information about school, or other problems in life. I am sure that they're willing to explain and care for you fully and clearly. They're really dedicated to their students.
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 you are visiting a base that
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, or other problems in life. I am sure that they're willing to
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IELTS letter would like to tell you about my school. . . . . . . . . .

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Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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