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worst condition of the road in front of my house kindly pay attention and finish.

worst condition of the road in front of my house kindly pay attention and finish. n6RQK

Dear Sir, My name is Fahad Kazmi. I live in Ajman near to safeer mall. I am writing this letter for your kind attention to the worst condition of the road in front of our apartment. I would like to explain to you that the road conditions are very bad and we all tenants are suffering from this situation for the last 3 months. The road was damaged due to rain water and the manholes are open, sewer water is coming out from that and it is a big problem for passers-by. This is the only way to go to the main market and bus station. Because of those manholes, an incident happened between a car and a pedestrian. People are avoiding this road at night because it is unsafe and dark. I would like to request you please take some necessary action and try to build this road as soon as possible so people can use this road without any problem. As this matter should solve on an urgent basis, your prompt action would be highly appreciated. Yours truly, Fahad

Dear Sir,

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Kazmi
. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
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Ajman
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safeer
 mall. I am writing this letter for your kind attention to the worst condition of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
 in front of our apartment.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 would like to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpret
explain
 to you that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
 conditions are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
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bad and
 we all tenants are suffering from this situation for the last 3 months. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
was damaged
 due to rain water and the manholes are open, sewer water is coming out from that and it is a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 problem for passers-by. This is the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 way to go to the main market and bus station. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
 of those manholes, an incident happened between a car and a pedestrian. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
People
 are avoiding this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
 at night This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 it is unsafe and dark.

I would like to request you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
 take This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 necessary action and try to build this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
 as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
 without any problem.

As this matter should solve on an urgent basis, your prompt action would be highly
 appreciated.

Yours truly
,

Fahad