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1. You have decided to do a course abroad. Your friend lives in the same city where you plan to study. Write to your friend explaining your academic profile and expectations from the course and university that you have aimed for. Inquire all options of studying from her. In your letter • Explain why you were not able to contact your friend earlier • Disclose your personal research about Canadian Schools • Ask her for a suggestion

1. You have decided to do a course abroad. Your friend lives in the same city where you plan to study. Write to your friend explaining your academic profile and expectations from the course and university that you have aimed for. Inquire all options of studying from her. In your letter • Explain why you were not able to contact your friend earlier • Disclose your personal research about Canadian Schools • Ask her for a suggestion OVMYM

Dear Emily, Hope you and your family are good and safe in this covid -19 pandemic situation across the world. I was wondering if you could favour for selection of course that I would like to pursue in Canada, next year. As you know that I am studying in Bachelor degree in finance in Ahmedabad, India. I was little bit on last year assignments and project that I have to furnish before the term, moreover I was also preparing for my IELTS exam so not in a position to catch you earlier. I feel glad to inform you that I have cleared both the exams with the flying colours. I want to continue my Master of Finance course from the Toronto, Canada. I firmly believe that finance is the evergreen field and now a days more financial professionals are required in the world. One of the main criteria for choosing the University for me is demonstration of practical exposure along with academics. Along with faculty members should be knowledgeable. Finally, historical ratio of placement must be high. As a prima phase of the research I come to know that ST. Martyn and Humber University are the best in this field and they can offer me all the outlooks for which I am looking for. Here, I would like to know from you, which re the different criteria for me to do proper selection of the university and I have secure good marks so that is relief for me. Which university would offer me high changes of getting placed and take my career to the next level. One Important point that I want to highlight is weather condition. You know me very well and in which area weather would be preferable to me for stay and study. I am looking forward to hearing from you and please take this on your top priority as I don’t want to miss the next intake. All the best, Tapan

Dear Emily,

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.

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 they can offer me all the outlooks for which I am looking for.

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know
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 well and in which area weather would be preferable to me for stay and study.

I am looking forward to hearing from you and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
 take this on your top priority as I don’t want to miss the next
 intake.

All the best,

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