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You paid a refundable deposit when you rented an apartment a year ago. You left the apartment last month in good condition, but the landlord won't return your deposit. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter, • introduce yourself and say why you are writing • ask for the return of your deposit • inform the landlord of possible action if he/she does not agree to refund the amount

You paid a refundable deposit when you rented an apartment a year ago. You left the apartment last month in good condition, but the landlord won't return your deposit. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter, • introduce yourself and say why you are writing • ask for the return of your deposit • inform the landlord of possible action if he/she does not agree to refund the amount 563dn
Dear John, Hope you and your family members are all doing well. I’m writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction on your denial of returning by deposit amount. I rented your flat a year ago which is located at Bridge street. However, I had vacated it last month due to some challenges. Now, I want to discuss with you regarding my advance amount which was paid before renting the apartment. As, I moved out from there and as per our initial agreement, my security deposit should be refunded whenever I vacate from the place. Keeping this in mind, requesting you to return my deposited amount through any mode of payment. You already had a sanity check and agreed that flat is in good condition without any leakages or breakages. I’m not clear about the reasons for opposing to pay my amount back. Since, we already had an agreement between us, I’m afraid that I’ll have to take a legal action and settle the matter in a court. Looking forward for a positive response from you. Yours Sincerely, Manasa
Dear John,

Hope you and your family members are all doing well. I’m writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction on your denial of returning by deposit amount.

I rented your flat a year ago which
is located
at Bridge street.
However
, I had vacated it last month due to
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
challenges.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Now
, I want to discuss with you regarding my advance amount which
was paid
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
renting the apartment.

As, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
moved
out from there and as per our initial agreement, my security deposit should
be refunded
whenever I vacate from the place. Keeping this in mind, requesting you to return my deposited amount through any mode of payment.

You already had a sanity
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agreed
that flat is in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
condition without any leakages or breakages. I’m not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
clear
about the reasons for opposing to pay my amount back. Since, we already had an agreement between us, I’m afraid that I’ll
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
take a legal action and settle the matter in a court.

Looking forward for a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
response from you.

Yours
Sincerely
,

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Manasa

IELTS letter You paid a refundable deposit when you rented an apartment a year ago. You left the apartment last month in good condition, but the landlord won't return your deposit. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter, • introduce yourself and say why you are writing • ask for the return of your deposit • inform the landlord of possible action if he/she does not agree to refund the amount

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