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You have just arrived in an English speaking country to study a course. Before you left your English teacher invited you to a dinner - thank him/her for the dinner - tell him/her about your studies - say how this advice helped you

You have just arrived in an English speaking country to study a course. Before you left your English teacher invited you to a dinner - thank him/her for the dinner - tell him/her about your studies - say how this advice helped you Dl6Go
Respected madam, I am thankful to you for your kind support due to which I achieved a high score in the IELTS exam and for inviting me to your house for dinner last week. I feel great and can’t explain my happiness for an invitation for dinner at your home. Actually, I was surprised and I just thought about how to react to your invitation. Thank you so much for making my favourite dish. It seems yummy. I hope you got trouble preparing my favourite dish. I must say dinner was garnished nicely and the taste was delicious. I got an admission in computer engineering to the well reputed University of Canada located in Ontario. Many students are getting placements every year with good pay scale. I have decided to stay with my brother in law as he lives nearby college. You are not only my teacher, you are also my good friend and well wisher as you ever helped me for my better future career. It is impossible for me to get a good band in IELTS but with your guidance I cracked it. Thank you again for invited me for Dinner, It's a memorable time spent with you Your sincerely Hemang patel
Respected madam,

I am thankful to you for your kind support due to which I achieved a high score in the IELTS exam and for inviting me to your
house
for
dinner
last week.

I feel great and can’t
explain
my happiness for an invitation for
dinner
at your home. Actually, I
was surprised
and I
just
thought
about how to react to your invitation. Thank you
so
much for making my
favourite
dish. It seems yummy. I hope you
got
trouble preparing my
favourite
dish. I
must
say
dinner
was garnished
nicely
and the taste was delicious.

I
got
an admission in computer engineering to the well reputed University of Canada located in Ontario.
Many
students are getting placements every year with
good
pay scale. I have decided to stay with my
brother in law
as he
lives
nearby college.

You are not
only
my teacher, you are
also
my
good
friend and
well wisher
as you ever
helped
me for my better future career. It is impossible for me to
get
a
good
band in IELTS
but
with your guidance I cracked it.

Thank you again for invited me for
Dinner
, It's a memorable time spent with you

Your
sincerely


Hemang
patel
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IELTS letter You have just arrived in an English speaking country to study a course. Before you left your English teacher invited you to a dinner - thank him/her for the dinner - tell him/her about your studies - say how this advice helped you

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
203 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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