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You have seen a course advertised online that you think would help you perform better at work. The course will take place during the week, so you will need to take time off work. Write a letter to your manager. In the letter say what the course is explain why you want to do the course and how it will be beneficial to the company suggest how your work can be covered while you attend the course.

You have seen a course advertised online that you think would help you perform better at work. The course will take place during the week, so you will need to take time off work. Write a letter to your manager. In the letter say what the course is explain why you want to do the course and how it will be beneficial to the company suggest how your work can be covered while you attend the course. 7aJN2
Dear Mr Brown, I am writing to get work off for a week in regards to attend classes for the Human Resources Management programme. Actually, It is going to start from 6th May till 12th May, I am planning to enrol in as it must be beneficial for my duties at work. However, the Human Resources course could help to enhance skills in my current position as HR Executive in your organisation. During the programme, I would learn about advanced management duties such as creating the policies, compliance, payroll, TDS, and territory skills. Looking at, our HR manager Mr Rajesh has resigned from his position, in the absence of him, I would not endure from any issue related to my work. Therefore, I have talked to my assistant Ms Neha regarding my list of duties while am away, she will be available for every work. Although, my cellphone will always on for any emergency. I will be grateful if you could sanction my leaves. I looking forward to your productive response. Yours Sincerely,
Dear Mr Brown,

I am writing to
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get
work off for a week
Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".
in regards to
attend classes for the Human Resources Management
Possible spelling mistake. 'programme' is British English.
programme
. Actually, It is going to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
from 6th May till 12th May, I am planning to enrol in as it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
be beneficial for my duties at work.

However
, the Human Resources course could
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
to enhance
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
in my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
position as HR Executive in your
Possible spelling mistake. 'organisation' is British English.
organisation
. During the
Possible spelling mistake. 'programme' is British English.
programme
, I would learn about advanced management duties such as creating the policies, compliance, payroll, TDS, and territory
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
. Looking at, our HR manager Mr Rajesh has resigned from his position, in the absence of him, I would not endure from any issue related to my work.

Therefore
, I have talked to my assistant Ms
Possible spelling mistake found.
Neha
regarding my list of duties while am away, she will be available for every work. Although, my cellphone will always on for any emergency.

I will be grateful if you could sanction my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leaves
.
Did you mean "I'm looking", "I am looking", or "I was looking"?
I looking
forward to your productive response.

Yours
Sincerely
,
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IELTS letter You have seen a course advertised online that you think would help you perform better at work. The course will take place during the week, so you will need to take time off work. Write a letter to your manager. In the letter say what the course is explain why you want to do the course and how it will be beneficial to the company suggest how your work can be covered while you attend the course.

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