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work undertaken is done unsatisfactorily

work undertaken is done unsatisfactorily L36EV

I am writing to express my strong dissatisfaction with the decorating servise which was done by your company staff a peer week ago. I am afraid to say I have numbers of complaint about their careless and unexperiensed. I believe you can appreciate how dissapointed I was when I faced with my room which it is wallpapers did not fit it is curtain and carpet. Furthermore, the most visible problem was it is quality that was very law sort not my ordered brand. I paid enough money is pointed on catalogue and I chose red carpet. However your brings was green, afrefwards it did not in ideal fit for my room desigh. The second issue that curtains. It is expected to send new version of modern curtains in my room same the colour carpet. Eventhough one of your staff draw and painted it on the computer than she send on my telegram channel. It is not one that I ordered. If you do not believe me I can represent to you. I would like to here your explanation for the above problems I would therefore be greatful if you could me a partial refund as soon as possible and plus the changed my carpets. I hope you will consider the points I have rised very carefully! Your sincerely, Dilbar

I am writing to express my strong dissatisfaction with the decorating Possible spelling mistake found.serviceservile
servise
 which was done
 by your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 staff a peer week ago. I am afraid to say I have numbers of complaint about their careless and Possible spelling mistake found.inexperienced
unexperiensed
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 believe you can appreciate how Possible spelling mistake found.disappointed
dissapointed
 I was when I faced with my room which it is wallpapers did not fit it is curtain and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtapestryrugcarpeting
carpet
. Furthermore
, the most visible problem was it is quality that was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 law sort not my ordered brand. I paid This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 money is pointed
 on Possible spelling mistake. 'catalogue' is British English.catalog
catalogue
 and I chose red You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtapestryrugcarpeting
carpet
. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?However,
However
 your brings was green, Possible spelling mistake found.afterwards
afrefwards
 it did not in ideal fit for my room Possible spelling mistake found.design
desigh
. The second issue that curtains. It is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipated
expected
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 new version of modern curtains in my room same the Possible spelling mistake. 'colour' is British English.color
colour
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtapestryrugcarpeting
carpet
. Possible spelling mistake found.Even though
Eventhough
 one of your staff draw and painted it on the computer than she The pronoun 'she' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "sends", "sent".sendssent
send
 on my telegram channel. It is not one that I ordered. “If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
 you do not believe me I can represent to you. I would like to here your explanation for the above problems I would therefore
 be Possible spelling mistake found.gratefuldreadfulrestfulfretful
greatful
 if you could me a partial refund as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible and plus the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtapestryrugcarpeting
carpets
. I hope you will consider the points I have Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean "rose", the past tense form of the verb 'rise'?roseraisedriserisenrisesrisked
rised
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
carefully
! Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)Yours
Your
sincerely
, Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphDilbar.Dilbar!Dilbar?Dilbar:Dilbar,Dilbar;
Dilbar