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convocation message of milind parekh from ganpat university

convocation message of milind parekh from ganpat university M3nEo
Hello #connections, I am happy to share with everyone that I have officially completed my graduation in Bachelor of Business Administration from Ganpat University. Days and nights were the same; late nights and early mornings were common matters; the determination was strong, and the mission was set in these three years. I am very glad to have this degree after all the hard work. I would like to thank you, my parents, the faculty members of GUNI VMPCMS, and my friends and other batch mates who supported me in this beautiful journey. This is the best 3 years of learning in my life, thank you.
Hello #connections,

I am happy to share with everyone that I have
officially
completed my graduation in Bachelor of Business Administration from
Ganpat
University.

Days and nights were the same; late nights and early mornings were common matters; the determination was strong, and the mission
was set
in these three years.

I am
very
glad to have this degree
after all
the
hard
work.

I would like to thank you, my parents, the faculty members of
GUNI
VMPCMS
, and my friends and other batch mates who supported me in this
beautiful
journey.

This is the best 3 years of learning in my life, thank you.
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105 words
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