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You are organising a conference in your organisation and you want your colleague from a different department to give a presentation.

You are organising a conference in your organisation and you want your colleague from a different department to give a presentation. peVwa
Dear Mr. Sehgal, I hope you are in your good health. This litter find you that my company arranged an international conferent in Dubai and I would be suggest your name to participate in the presentation. You have a great opportunity to present youself to all around because the conference is hold in Dubai and there are many multinational company invited by us to give the presentation. The presentation is about the how to reduce your fear with your senior and I think this none of your department because you are work as an engineer but this is very useful to you when you are work with your senior. At this time, you need to prepare some reasonable thoughts and elaborate your way of thinking and prepare some questionaire to ask others. Furthermore, ready a few quetion answer which is asked by the pannel who seat on the first row in the room. Please inform me you need to futher information about the presentation. Yours sincerely, Namrata Sonani.
Dear Mr.
Sehgal
,

I hope you are in your
good
health. This litter find you that my
company
arranged an international
conferent
in Dubai and I would be
suggest
your name to participate in the presentation.

You have a great opportunity to present
youself
to all around
because
the conference is hold in Dubai and there are
many
multinational
company
invited by us to give the presentation. The presentation is about
the how
to
reduce
your fear with your senior and I
think
this none of your department
because
you are work as an engineer
but
this is
very
useful to you when you are work with your senior.

At this time, you need to prepare
some
reasonable thoughts and elaborate your way of thinking and prepare
some
questionaire
to ask others.
Furthermore
, ready a few
quetion
answer which
is asked
by the
pannel
who seat on the
first
row in the room.

Please
inform me you need to
futher
information about the presentation.

Yours
sincerely
,
Namrata
Sonani
.
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IELTS letter You are organising a conference in your organisation and you want your colleague from a different department to give a presentation.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
168 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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