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Letter for christmas send to my boyfriend

Letter for christmas send to my boyfriend N3oay
This is the first time we celebrate in Christmas Eve. We have one more memory together. I remember you said to me that we can make all of happiness story, and future also. And i always try to do that with you. We are two independent individuals, coming from two countries, different cultures. Each of us has our own thoughts, that's why sometimes will have some quarrels. But after all I just hope we can get through to understand each other better and love more. Im not good at expressing emotions, sometimes acting indiffirent. But Mingi ah, i love you by all of my heart. You taught me a lot of things and give me your love. I love the feeling of being loved and when i stay with you. Im so grateful for what you have done for me. You're the biggest encouragement for me. We just have dated for 3 months, just start, but i cherish that time. I hope it will be as long as it can. I will beside you everytime, always be honest, loyal to you and treat you well. Im not good at writting letters, overall, I love you.
This is the
first
time we celebrate in Christmas Eve. We have one more memory together. I remember you said to me that we can
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make
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all of happiness
story, and future
also
. And
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i
always try to do that with you. We are two independent individuals, coming from two countries,
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different
cultures. Each of us has our
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own
thoughts, that's why
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sometimes
will have
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some
quarrels.
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But
after all
I
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just
hope we can
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get
through to understand each other better and
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love
more.
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Im
not
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good
at expressing emotions,
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sometimes
acting
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indiffirent
.
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But
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Mingi
ah,
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i
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love
you by all of my heart. You taught me
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a lot of
things and give me your
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love
. I
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love
the feeling of being
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loved
and when
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i
stay with you.
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Im
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so
grateful for what you have done for me. You're the biggest encouragement for me. We
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just
have dated for 3 months,
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just
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start
,
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but
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i
cherish that time. I hope it will be as long as it can. I will beside you
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everytime
, always be honest, loyal to you and treat you well.
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Im
not
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good
at
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writting
letters,
overall
, I
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love
you.
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IELTS letter Letter for christmas send to my boyfriend

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
195 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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