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//did A A COOKERY COURSE // what you enjoyed // cokking done since the class // Another coookery course

//did A A COOKERY COURSE // what you enjoyed // cokking done since the class // Another coookery course 70Bjk
//did A A COOKERY COURSE // what you enjoyed // cokking done since the class // Another coookery course you would like: Dear Sir or Madam, I am a former student from the baking class offered by your school and wanted to share some thoughts around the overall experience. Firstly, I thoroughly enjoyed the baking course as it was exteremely fun course to attend. The teacher's were very patient and calm and helped me with the portions of the recipes. Secondly, the equipments given to us were also of top notch quality which made the whole experience more exciting and pleasurable. To add to that, there were so many variations of cakes and cookie we learned in the course which gave us enough hands on exposure. In fact, after the course finished I tried to make quite a few cakes as well as biscuits in many of my family events. I have received compliments on my cooking skills from family and friends alike, which gave a huge boost to my confidence in cooking. I also tried my hand in baking some birthday cakes for some of my acquaintances and they were very pleased with how the cakes turned out. In my opinion the school can also offer some Chinese snacks course as its quite popular in the area. The ingredients are not as expensive and it requires less number of equipments as well. I am quite sure that, due to the high demand in chinese delicacies many people would be interested to enroll in this course. Looking foward to hearing from you. Your sincerely, John.
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A A
COOKERY
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COURSE
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cokking
done since the
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class
// Another
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coookery
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course
you would like:

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am a former student from the baking
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class
offered by your school and wanted to share
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some
thoughts around the
overall
experience.

Firstly
, I
thoroughly
enjoyed the baking
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course
as it was
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exteremely
fun
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course
to attend. The teacher's were
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very
patient and calm and
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helped
me with the portions of the recipes.
Secondly
, the equipments
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given
to us were
also
of
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top notch
quality which made the whole experience more exciting and pleasurable. To
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add
to that, there were
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so
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many
variations of
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cakes
and cookie we learned in the
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course
which gave us
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enough
hands on exposure.

In fact, after the
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course
finished I tried to
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make
quite a few
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cakes
as well
as biscuits in
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many
of my family
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events
. I have received compliments on my cooking
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skills
from family and friends alike, which gave a huge boost to my confidence in cooking. I
also
tried my hand in baking
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some
birthday
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cakes
for
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some
of my
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acquaintances and
they were
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very
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pleased
with how the
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cakes
turned out.

In my opinion the school can
also
offer
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some
Chinese snacks
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course
as its quite popular in the area. The ingredients are not as expensive and it requires less number of equipments
as well
. I am quite sure that, due to the high demand in
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chinese
delicacies
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many
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people
would
be interested
to enroll in this course.

Looking
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foward
to hearing from you.

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Your
sincerely
,

John.
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IELTS letter //did A A COOKERY COURSE // what you enjoyed // cokking done since the class // Another coookery course

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