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Many thanks for the information from Mr.Tung.

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Dear All, Many thanks for the information from Mr. Tung. Through REP team orientation meetings and internal training meetings, I appreciate our opportunity in the future. We are on a way of integrating digitalization and machine learning to upgrade to service 4. 0. We are implementing a subscription business strategy, so we would be customers’ closest partner to improve their overall business strategy and efficiency. Last but not least, with professional and enthusiastic human resources, we are keeping competitive advantages in the market, especially, in Pulp & Paper, Cement, Power Plant, Steel industrial segments. Of course, we still have some battles to be won. If we keep motivated and better every day, we would cope with obstacles in the future. The more efforts we have, the more successful we achieve. I am a new member of our SKF family, and I am trying my best to adapt to my position and acquire essential knowledge to contribute a part to the overall success of the company in the future. I strongly believe that I would receive significant support from all of you. Best regard, To Ngoc Long
Dear All,

Many
thanks for the information from Mr.
Tung
. Through REP team orientation meetings and internal training meetings, I appreciate our opportunity in the future. We are on a way of integrating digitalization and machine learning to upgrade to service 4. 0. We are implementing a subscription business strategy,
so
we would be customers’ closest partner to
improve
their
overall
business strategy and efficiency. Last
but
not least, with professional and enthusiastic human resources, we are keeping competitive advantages in the market,
especially
, in Pulp & Paper, Cement, Power Plant, Steel industrial segments.

Of course
, we
still
have
some
battles to
be won
. If we
keep
motivated and better every day, we would cope with obstacles in the future. The more efforts we have, the more successful we achieve.

I am a new member of our
SKF
family, and I am trying my best to adapt to my position and acquire essential knowledge to contribute a part to the
overall
success of the
company
in the future. I
strongly
believe that I would receive significant support from all of you.

Best
regard
,

To
Ngoc
Long
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IELTS letter Many thanks for the information from Mr. Tung.

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  American English
6 paragraphs
185 words
6.0
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