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Why would you recommend Dipti Shah's online English & public speaking course to your family & friends? Give 3 reasons.

Why would you recommend Dipti Shah's online English & public speaking course to your family & friends? Give 3 reasons. Ymk6j
Good morning Everyone, today, I am going to talk about, Why would I recommend Dipti Shah's online English & public speaking course to my family & friends? SO, first I will introduce myself and a little incident. I am Keval Chhaya. I have completed diploma courses in the software branch in 2021. But, my next plan was to go to Canada and I started IELTS exam preparation but I wasn't understanding questions, grammar rules and I wasn't very good at speaking English. All the time I was afraid, hesitant, and nervous in the lecture. So, sometimes I didn't attend the speaking lecture. The first time, I had talk spoken English to by phone my uncle and he said, you are speaking Gujju English, your grammar and sentence structure are too bad. Therefore, he suggested to me that you join Dipti Shah's Institute of English, Public Speaking & Self-development. After that, I joined the Dipti Shah's classes on 15th November in 2021, this batch is online, and the first week I was also nervous and not confident to speak English, after two week's I was speaking English without hesitation and fear. Therefore, I will explain three main points because the best spoken English, Public speaking, and self-development institute of Gujarat is Dipti Shah's institute. Dipti mam's teaching style is very different from other English teachers. Dipti mam provides a lot of reference material recommended as different YouTube videos, drama series, and read aloud in English books. This improves my listening and reading skills. Moreover, the last three weeks have been thrilling and exciting with a lot of convention practices and delivering speeches, idioms, brainstorming, et cetera. In the last two week's, we enjoyed the cream of the cake because it is science and art effective public speaking, for that several techniques, which include, cream techniques, poems, shear, and Shari et cetera. which serve group discussion, cue card, debate and speeches in breakout classroom. So this strategy has a big impact on spoken English. Dipti mam's said in every lecture "You Work Hard" "You Work Hard". That time I was working hard. So, today, I am speaking English very well. But, Ralph Waldo Emerson's effective dialogue said “All the great speakers were bad speakers at first. ” So this dialogue had more effect on my life and I asked myself, why am I afraid to speak English? All the great speakers were bad speakers at first. ” So why I'm not starting to speak English? Why am I hesitant and nervous? I started to speak English and to this day I speak very well. Talk about Amit sir, Amit sir talk to in the lecture, How to make a billionaire in the life, How to prepared for an interview, jobs, memory management and lots of topics he said in the lecture, How to a different thing to another. Amit sir's lecture is motivational because How to handle real-life situations, how to make a personality. Thank you so much, Dipti mam, Amit sir, all group leaders, and my group leader Mania mam. Thank you, everyone.
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