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ask hotel manager to send lost papers back

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Dear sir or madam, I am writing concerning the important documents I have lost in the hotel you manage. As you may know, there was an international meeting last night hosted by Hotel California, and I was one the attendees. At this meeting, we had a long complicated discussion about a vital business going to establish soon, and at the end, we reached an agreement and both sides signed the contract, but when I got home, I couldn’t find my version. The last thing I remember, is that I witnessed it on the big table in the lobby, the side that is nearest to the window. So I think I’ve forgotten to pick them due to fatigue I was feeling after the negotiation. My kind request is to ask your team to post me my missing paper if already found it. Otherwise, please do me a favor by looking at the cameras and searching around the place we sat. I would appreciate if you give me a call about the result of the action. My address and phone number are attached. Yours faithfully, Amir Khamesipour
Dear sir or madam,

I am writing concerning the
important
documents I have lost in the hotel you manage.

As you may know, there was an international meeting last night hosted by Hotel California, and I was
one
the attendees. At this meeting, we had a long complicated discussion about a vital business going to establish
soon
, and at the
end
, we reached an agreement and both sides signed the contract,
but
when I
got
home, I couldn’t find my version.

The last thing I remember, is that I witnessed it on the
big
table in the lobby, the side
that is
nearest to the window.
So
I
think
I’ve forgotten to pick them due to fatigue I was feeling after the negotiation.

My kind request is to ask your team to post me my missing paper if already found it.
Otherwise
,
please
do me a favor by looking at the cameras and searching around the place we sat.

I would appreciate if you give me a call about the result of the action. My address and phone number
are attached
.

Yours
faithfully
,

Amir
Khamesipour
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IELTS letter ask hotel manager to send lost papers back

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6.5
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