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You want to volunteer to help the old people of your community. An organization in your area works for the benefit of old people. Write a letter to the in-charge of that organization explaining - Why do you want to help - How can you help them - When will you be available

You want to volunteer to help the old people of your community. An organization in your area works for the benefit of old people. Write a letter to the in-charge of that organization explaining - Why do you want to help - How can you help them - When will you be available oRkdw
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to offer my services as a volunteer to work for the benefits of the elderly people of our society. Let me explain it in detail. I am a student of graduation doing a degree in "Geriatric psychology". My first semester has ended and now there is a gap of two months before the start of second semester. I possess excellent reading abilities so I could read for the people with weaker vision. Other than that, I can take people on the wheelchair and move around the garden of the area in the evening. In this way, I can communicate with them to know their problems which will be beneficial for me in writing a thesis for my degree. I am pleased to tell you that I am available for a full day from morning till night for a whole week. It would be my pleasure to serve for the aging population of our society. Hoping to receive a positive response from you.
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to offer my services as a volunteer to work for the benefits of the elderly
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people
of our society.

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Let
me
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explain
it in detail. I am a student of graduation doing a degree in
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Geriatric psychology
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. My
first
semester has ended and
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now
there is a gap of two months
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before
the
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start
of second semester. I possess excellent reading abilities
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so
I could read for the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
with weaker vision. Other than that, I can take
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
on the wheelchair and
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move
around the garden of the area in the evening. In this way, I can communicate with them to know their problems which will be beneficial for me in writing a thesis for my degree.

I am
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pleased
to
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tell
you that I am available for a full day from morning till night for a whole week. It would be my pleasure to serve for the aging population of our society.

Hoping to receive a
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positive
response from you.

IELTS letter You want to volunteer to help the old people of your community. An organization in your area works for the benefit of old people. Write a letter to the in-charge of that organization explaining - Why do you want to help - How can you help them - When will you be available

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
171 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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