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What sort of clothes do you like wearing? do you like or dislike school uniforms

What sort of clothes do you like wearing? do you like or dislike school uniforms pK2Da
Dear Becky, Thanks for your letter and it was great to hear from you. You asked me to tell you about what kind of clothes I like wearing. I hope the following suggestions will be useful for you. Genuinely, that is a hard question because I like wearing many various genres but in terms of style, I favor casuals. That style appeals to me since it is both comfy and adaptable. In addition, I normally wear jeans on a daily basis because they are easy to mix with a T-shirt and sneakers. Regarding uniforms, I enjoy wearing them since my school uniforms are designed in a dynamic, trendy, and attractive way. Furthermore, school uniforms promote equality in the school atmosphere, and I don't have to waste time worrying about what to wear. I hope these responses are helpful. Love, Phuong
Dear Becky,

Thanks for your letter and it was great to hear from you. You asked me to
tell
you about what kind of clothes I like wearing. I hope the following suggestions will be useful for you.

Genuinely
,
that is
a
hard
question
because
I like wearing
many
various genres
but
in terms of style, I favor casuals. That style appeals to me since it is both comfy and adaptable.
In addition
, I
normally
wear jeans on a daily basis
because
they are easy to mix with a T-shirt and sneakers.

Regarding uniforms, I enjoy wearing them since my school uniforms
are designed
in a dynamic, trendy, and attractive way.
Furthermore
, school uniforms promote equality in the school atmosphere, and I don't
have to
waste time worrying about what to wear.

I hope these responses are helpful.

Love
,

Phuong
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IELTS letter What sort of clothes do you like wearing? do you like or dislike school uniforms

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  American English
7 paragraphs
139 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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