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Visited museum with elder relative find it difficult to explore it

Visited museum with elder relative find it difficult to explore it rWRm

Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to express my deep dissatisfaction regarding the facilities in museum, which is under your counseling wright now. Though, the museum is well maintained and gives lots of information about our history but still there are some error which is bothering while exploring it, specifically to older generation. Last week I visited the museum with my grandmother mother, she is huge fan of history and always enthusiastic to visit historical places. It was her birthday, so we decided to visit museum on this jubilant moment, but unfortunately it was not for good experience for her, because got lot of trouble to explore it. The museum is too big. My grandmother is in her 80s now and at this age almost all people find difficulty to walk for longer time. Well, I want request you to improve the facilities like add some wheelchairs, so no one face any difficulty in future to a take a glimpse of such a magnificent structure of the museum and historical displays. Your Sincerely, Renuka Gandhare.

Dear Sir,

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