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visited friend place and forgot something 1. thank him for stay 2. what forgot 3. how to send

visited friend place and forgot something 1. thank him for stay 2. what forgot 3. how to send nxWQP
Dear John, I hope this letter finds you in good health & spirits. Firstly, thank you for the great weekend together, it was really exciting and grateful to you for being such a great host. We hope you visit us soon and have a quality time. Once I returned home, found that my watch was missing. I guess I left it in your bathroom. Prior leaving your house, I took a shower presumably, that may be the time I forgot it in the bathroom. It is a diver analog watch with a circular dial, the dial and the strap are in black color, however, the buckle, lug and bezel are in white. I am sure you will recognize it once you see it. I expect that it would not be a trouble to send it back. As it is a gift, it would be disappointing if I lose it, consequently, please return it via courier service to my home address I will bear the courier cost. Thank you in advance and I wish to see you soon at my place. Lots of love,
Dear John,

I hope this letter finds you in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
health & spirits.
Firstly
, thank you for the great weekend together, it was
really
exciting and grateful to you for being such a great host. We hope you visit us
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
and have a quality time.

Once I returned home, found that my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
watch
was missing. I guess I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
it in your bathroom.
Probably a preposition is missing after 'Prior'.
Prior leaving
your
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house
, I took a shower presumably, that may be the time I forgot it in the bathroom. It is a diver analog
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
watch
with a circular dial, the dial and the strap are in black color,
however
, the buckle, lug and bezel are in white. I am sure you will recognize it once you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
it.

I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
expect
that it would not be a trouble to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
it back. As it is a gift, it would be disappointing if I lose it,
consequently
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
return it via courier service to my home address I will bear the courier cost.

Thank you in advance and I wish to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
at my place.

Lots of
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love
,
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IELTS letter visited friend place and forgot something 1. thank him for stay 2. what forgot 3. how to send

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  American English
6 paragraphs
183 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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