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Request for a re-issuance of a study abroad degree

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From: Leon To: The principal of the college Cc: Simon Sub: Request for a re-issuance of a study abroad degree Respected Simon, Hello Mr. Simon, Sorry for the inconvenience but when you get this email I'm really desperate. Because of having lost my graduation certificate. I'm furious at myself for being so careless about losing my certificate. I have written this email for you to ask permission for a degree re-certificate. It is a bachelor of technology certificate. That certification is really valuable to me and my career. Another reason is that when I am the sole person picked to go, my firm has put a lot of faith in me, so they'll be disappointed to hear that I've lost my study abroad certificates. That's why I'm relying on you to reissue the certificate for me. That certificate is valid for me to advance in work. As you know, a university certificate is extremely valuable, and a bachelor's certificate for study abroad is even more valuable. I put in a lot of sweat, effort, and gray matter to get there. That is why I genuinely thank your consideration and hope that you reply to this email. Respectfully. Leon
From: Leon

To: The principal of the college

Cc: Simon

Sub: Request for a re-issuance of a study abroad degree

Respected Simon,

Hello Mr. Simon, Sorry for the inconvenience
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but
when you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
this email I'm
really
desperate.
“Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
of having lost my graduation
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
certificate
. I'm furious at myself for being
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
careless about losing my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
certificate
. I have written this email for you to ask permission for a degree re-certificate. It is a bachelor of technology
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
certificate
. That certification is
really
valuable to me and my career. Another reason is that when I am the sole person picked to go, my firm has put
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
faith in me,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
they'll
be disappointed
to hear that I've lost my study abroad
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
certificates
. That's why I'm relying on you to reissue the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
certificate
for me. That
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
certificate
is valid for me to advance in work. As you know, a university
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
certificate
is
extremely
valuable, and a bachelor's
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
certificate
for study abroad is even more valuable. I put in
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
sweat, effort, and gray matter to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
there.
That is
why I
genuinely
thank your consideration and hope that you reply to this email.

Respectfully
.

Leon
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IELTS letter Request for a re-issuance of a study abroad degree

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
197 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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