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Using the information given in the case notes, write a letter to the Community Health Nurse in Centreville,outlining the patient’s history and requesting ongoing monitoring. Address the letter to the Community Health Nurse, Eastern Community Health Centre, 456 East Street, Centreville.

Using the information given in the case notes, write a letter to the Community Health Nurse in Centreville, outlining the patient’s history and requesting ongoing monitoring. Address the letter to the Community Health Nurse, Eastern Community Health Centre, 456 East Street, Centreville. BYjD5
Community Health Nurse Eastern Community Health Centre 456 East Street Centreville 22 January 2019 Dear Nurse Re: Mr Peter Dunbar DOB 18. 03. 1932 Thank you for accepting Mr Dunbar into your care for the regular monitoring of his diabetes and encouragement to comply with his medication and dietary regimens. Mr Dunbar is moving to Centreville to live with his daughter. Since October 2018, Mr Dunbar has shown signs of diabetic neuropathy and consequently mobilises with a walking stick. His type 2 diabetes is controlled by metformin and through his diet, however, he remains resistant to any form of treatment, and has not been compliant with his medication regimen, reporting poor memory as the primary cause of his neglect. On occasion he also double doses. Contrary to advice, Mr Dunbar has continued to consume excessive amounts of alcohol, fatty foods, salt and sugar since the death of his wife last year, contributing to his current condition. While his daughter will now be cooking for him, she will require some guidance related to his needs. In June 2018, he suffered a myocardial infarction for which he was hospitalised at City Hospital in Newtown. He was diagnosed with atrial fibrillation on the same admission and was subsequently prescribed warfarin and sotalol. His hypertension is controlled by Ramipril. As with his other medication, Mr Dunbar is intermittent in his compliance. Thank you for your continued management of this patient. Yours faithfully, rn
Community Health Nurse

Eastern Community Health
Centre


456 East Street

Centreville


22 January 2019

Dear Nurse

Re: Mr Peter Dunbar

DOB 18. 03. 1932

Thank you for accepting Mr Dunbar into your care for the regular monitoring of his diabetes and encouragement to

comply with his medication and dietary regimens. Mr Dunbar is moving to
Centreville
to
live
with his daughter.

Since October 2018, Mr Dunbar has shown signs of diabetic neuropathy and
consequently
mobilises
with a walking

stick. His type 2 diabetes
is controlled
by metformin and through his diet,
however
, he remains resistant to any form of

treatment, and has not been compliant with his medication regimen, reporting poor memory as the primary cause of

his neglect. On
occasion he
also
double doses. Contrary to advice, Mr Dunbar has continued to consume excessive

amounts of alcohol, fatty foods, salt and sugar since the death of his wife last year, contributing to his
current


condition. While his daughter will
now
be cooking for him, she will require
some
guidance related to his needs.

In June 2018, he suffered a myocardial infarction for which he was
hospitalised
at City Hospital in
Newtown
. He
was diagnosed
with atrial fibrillation on the same admission and was
subsequently
prescribed warfarin and
sotalol
. His

hypertension
is controlled
by
Ramipril
. As with his other medication, Mr Dunbar is intermittent in his compliance.

Thank you for your continued management of this patient.

Yours
faithfully
,
rn
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IELTS letter Using the information given in the case notes, write a letter to the Community Health Nurse in Centreville, outlining the patient’s history and requesting ongoing monitoring. Address the letter to the Community Health Nurse, Eastern Community Health Centre, 456 East Street, Centreville.

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