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student permit minor for her

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Dear Sir/ Ma’am My name is Sara Gamal. I am mother of Layan Emad Emam. She is 3 years old, and I wish to apply student permit minor for her to be with me duration of my study in Canada which will start September 2022. Layan is a superb and active girl who is an alone child. She needs in this early age me to care for her. Furthermore, we become relation between her and me is strong and knit which I cannot achievement any tasks without her like groceries, shopping, and reading which almost of time have been spent with her. In addition, we know Canada consider from a little country who concern about family reunions and especially children. If I am granted a permit in Canada we will send her to pre-school, and a daycare center, but if non my husband and I are available. This is time I can spend more time with her, and it helps me to concentrate in my study in order to I will graduate from college, and rapid comeback my home. On behalf of our daughter. I am seeking your approval and allow her a student permit minor visa. Sincerely yours Sara Gamal Mohamed
Dear Sir/ Ma’am

My name is Sara
Gamal
. I am mother of
Layan
Emad
Emam
. She is 3 years
old
, and I wish to apply student permit minor for her to be with me duration of my study in Canada which will
start
September 2022.

Layan
is a superb and active girl who is an alone child. She needs in this early age me to care for her.
Furthermore
, we become relation between her and me is strong and knit which I cannot achievement any tasks without her like groceries, shopping, and reading which almost of time have
been spent
with her.
In addition
, we know Canada
consider
from a
little
country who concern about family reunions and
especially
children.

If I
am granted
a permit in Canada we will
send
her to
pre-school
, and a daycare center,
but
if non my husband and I are available. This is time I can spend more time with her, and it
helps
me to concentrate in my study in order to I will graduate from college, and rapid comeback my home.

On behalf of our daughter. I am seeking your approval and
allow
her a student permit minor visa.

Sincerely
yours

Sara
Gamal
Mohamed
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IELTS letter student permit minor for her

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201 words
6.0
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