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Dear Jackson, I hope you and your family are well. I am really excited to hear that you had a wonderful summer holiday in the countryside with your grandparents. And now, I would like to tell you about my 2 week- fantastic vacation in Japan. As you know, Japan is the country I always want to visit because of its breathtaking scenery, long cultural history, and incredible cuisine. It took me about 6 hours to reach my destination, Tokyo airport is the place I landed. I decided to have a tour to explore every corner of the bustling city. I dropped in Ghibli museum, a world of Ghibli works will be created. I experienced the Neko bus that appeared in the anime “Tonari no Tororo” and also enjoyed authentic Ghibli dishes. I continue my journey to Kyoto - Once the capital of Japan. Kyoto’s most renowned Geisha district and an absolute mecca for green tea (matcha) lovers like me with a variety of dishes made from green tea such as ice cream, mochi, hot lattes. I love all of this the first time and I bought some biscuits or candy as souvenirs for my friends. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Best wishes,

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